Teh Outside World

[POCKETMAN]

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Brunzolaitis sent this to me earlier. It's a remix of "outside", the 6th song that will be on the CD. I asked him if he was done. He said he didn't know and asked what I thought. I'll tell him. However I think we all should.

[POCKETMAN]

Come on everyone, help this song out.

Alright. I like the drum beat. However, it does not change enough in my opinion. I'm not sure where, can't listen to it right now. I'll get back to ya for sure, but around the end a new style comes in. It's to much unlike what you had going before. Keep the change, but change what you changed it into. Make sense?

[Baggins]

Yes the drum beat is repetative and long, I would take Pocketman's advice. I like most of what you have but the fast part at the end makes me want to shoot myself.

[brunzolaitis]

just a slight rework:
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